Pitch Evaluation

Overall, I believe the pitch was success. We gave plenty of indepth research of where we got our ideas and supported this with visual and spoken aids. Using evidence through a powerpoint, we showed both aspects from our blog and several music videos we had analysed, to give a clear understanding to the audience of our intentions. However, from the feedback we recieved, it was clarified that improvement was needed in the step outline of the music video. Although we had several detailed ideas and explanations in the step outline, the idea as a whole was too complex. We were able to recreate a revamped step outline, which is posted on the blog below.

George Palmer.

I am proud of how our pitch turned out and I feel that it really helped us to define a direction for our project from the feedback we recieved. We have now re-written our step outline and I feel it is much more achieveable than the original concept. We tried to justify our ideas using a range of sourcessuch as : from our blog and other music videos we felt were relevant, including; 'Florence & The Machiene - Dog Days' as it was set in a forest, and 'One Night Only - Say You Don't Want It' - from the typically indie style and the interesting twist at the end.
I am excited about furthuring our idea; that instead of simply following a 'boy meets girl' relationship in our video, we plan to create a twist at the end where the couple turn out to be wombats - which satisfys as a subtle form of self-promotion for the band as they are themselves called 'The Wombats'.

Lorna Spencer

Well I feel the pitch went rather well too. Our ideas came across well with the audience as they like all of our ideas. The only problem they suggested we had was that we had too many ideas and maybe needed to simplyfy it more. The videos we used in our presentation helped us show the audience what we meant with our performance ideas, narrative twists and location for the video itself. Also I felt we all work great together as we all pitched in and help to explain things throughly to the audience.
After the feedback from the audience we have now simplified the idea of our video, put more detail into the step outline and have a more focused idea.

Steph Sverdloff